negative critique

My negative images came out fine and
some of them had a good frame and focus
i am happy with my pictures.

story

the girl sits and does her work but at the same

time the time has stoped and everyone around her is moving, the girl looks sad compared to the others and just in another world.

the emotion is, working quiet and

action is the people around her are moving.

this picture describes me,

how is that i am a swmmer.

Chris DittoSecond PlaceAdv Color Sports/Action2003 Fall ContestWestlake HS - Austin, TX

the camera

what is the same about my pinhole camera and the SLR camera is
that the are both black and white.
what is different is that when you shot an SLR camera it takes just a second and with a
pinhole camera you have to have the window open for at least 20 or 10 or 5 sceonds.

this picture does not show action or person in this photo

why i like this photo is because well it reminds me of memorise

and well it is very cool and awsome!

why i do not like this photo is there is barely

nothing to see.

and it has no movment